Monday, October 3, 2016

MMJ4

MMJ4  work for hire & all commercial rights. So I can put it in book and self publish per rules.
Margaret Merlin's Journal Book 1 https://www.amazon.com/Margaret-Merlins-Journal-Battle-Black-ebook/dp/B01634G3CK/
rough sketch inspiration please see all girl photos & all of teen boy photos & scroll to end :)
tweaks:
Poses/fingers (no flat palms)
face girl should have intensity like this: arms like below she wants to get these bad guys
girls eyes/lips similar to either below :







GIRL has cool outfit not like a traditional chinese but Hunger Games style hot.
 

Prototype wizard boy:
Boy's action pose/fingers Boy has a coat/fur on top. NO CLOAK make solider hot coat like this.up
action pose/finger pose
Wand in hand
 
No shawl hot buttons  Hot fur collars & hot long coats with cool shirts under neath metal on chest
 
No shawl on coat hot soldier buttons    Legs manly                 Cool CHAINS from fur colla
VERY BAD MALE WIZARD LEADER OF THE 12 CLOAKED WIZARDS. LONG CLOAK

They are in middle of snow in the middle of nowwhere very rugged/area.wizard long CLOAK

SCROLL DOWN FOR COSTUMES FOR MALE/GIRL ACTION POSE FINGERS girl in white :)
cat LUTEMIS PREXIMUS AKA CAT  MISCHIEF FLUFFY charcoal black with blue eyes

CLOAKED WIZARD HAS MAGIC WAND OF LIGHT not fire ball ;) girl breaks his wand with her chi energy light she learned from grand master  Fox is now a unicorn/lion dragon ;)
Chinese Xiezhi unicorn horn/lion dragon, fur on head, claws okay, big tail. blue and gold colors 
*****************************Fingers & position of arms for girl *********************
Girl pose in a very cool outfit. Color see red or purple or white purle below scroll down 
 Hot new modern classic & new hip Kung Fu/Magic Wizard out fit for girl Leather accent
                                     
Fur blue & white outfit    No black color for girl ideas for her Hunger games/Kung Fu wizard
Fur trim? or leather trim...as they are in snow/mountains on their dangerous quest
 Teen hot wizard  fur color on outfit
no Egyptian eye on belt  make cuffs more soldier looking & not spacey :)
Wizard Teen make long bangs dark brown hair /dark brown eyes handsome/cool /coat

 ********Teen wizard dark long bangs inbetween these up & down here the face************

Soldier classic buttons out fit on handsome/hot/teen wizard lead

Teen boy action pose male next to girl wearing soldier fur hot out fit ********************
 Teen girl and her pose :)  Cool hair  cool braid in hair long flying hair as battle bad guy
Girl action pose hand position placement-- her magic breaks symbol sword of bad guy
 Traditional dress with modern mix idea.   Always have magic power to break the sword of dark wizard
                                  GIRL POSE EYES FACING HER ENEMY THIS IS GOOD POSE
 Girl & Guy standing action pose flying fighting together to get the key first from cloaked bad wizard man
fighting together againt
evil cloaked wizard men  12 of them but can use 1????

OLD WIZARD POSE FIGHTING THE TEEN WIZARDS POSE LEFT SIDE OF PAGE
***Girl will break the symbol sword shield of the bad cloaked wizard guy*******
CLOAKED WIZARD WITH SYMBOL SHIELD FLIES?
COOL EFFECT  HER JOURNAL PAPERS HAVE THE KEY LOCATION CLUES
COOL IDEA BUT PUT SYMBOLS CAT ON IT WITH KEY????

Beautiful color. Girl needs a stunning Kung Fu outfit strong & feminine
                                                 Cool outfits  Red white or blue white and gold
                                         Use this as book cover to create on Chinese temple in snow/moutain
 They go to cold mountains of China to train & find the key of light or loose magic power & be destroyed. SNOW faded CHINESE CASTLE with Fox and Key a symbol and the bad guy there.
Symbol on door of city???They have tatoe mark on them from wizards erasing their memory
wizard face mark like wolves
This would be so cool if we could do this :) in magic swirl light or eyes omg
they both have tatto on hand & matches bad guy wizards tattoo mark/symbol on hand

Flying pages of journal on book cover? SNOW ON BOOK COVER
cloaked faded wizards 11 behind the main guy faded
**idea to put faded 11 cloaked wizards behind the main bad guy wizard fighting boy & girl *****
BAD WIZARD STEPS ON BOOK WHICH ACTIVATES PAGES AND GIRLS POWER BACK!!





 Title colors shinny silver (try black as well :)
 Boy teens face. with goat tee hair.
   Boy teen dark black/brown hair aqua blue green eyes.
 Cool outfits. Fur. Probably some fur & steel Armour as Chinese kung fun is cloth. Modern
(save steel Armour for Book 5 or Book 6


 Cool soldier/hood outfit.  Long sleeve outfit.
 Fire balls.

Soldier brass buttons cloaked outfits/ Manly outfit/handsome clothes.

White Castle Chinese traditional in back ground faded small on top of snowy
mountain Top.  SNOW



 MODERN HIP CLOAK HOOD YOUNG TEEN HOT MODERN WIZARD COOL

 grand master teacher them
 MAGIC SWIRLS OF LIGHT AS THEY use KARATE HAND ACTION POSE IDEAS
 Swirls of magic light
 costume ideas  so pretty blue and white