Children's Book Club

MMJ4 work for hire & all commercial rights. So I can put it in book and self publish per rules.
Margaret Merlin's Journal Book 1 https://www.amazon.com/Margaret-Merlins-Journal-Battle-Black-ebook/dp/B01634G3CK/
rough sketch inspiration please see all girl photos & all of teen boy photos & scroll to end :)
tweaks:
Poses/fingers (no flat palms)
face girl should have intensity like this: arms like below she wants to get these bad guys
girls eyes/lips similar to either below :

GIRL has cool outfit not like a traditional chinese but Hunger Games style hot.

Prototype wizard boy:

Boy's action pose/fingers Boy has a coat/fur on top. NO CLOAK make solider hot coat like this.up
action pose/finger pose

Wand in hand

No shawl hot buttons Hot fur collars & hot long coats with cool shirts under neath metal on chest

No shawl on coat hot soldier buttons Legs manly Cool CHAINS from fur colla

VERY BAD MALE WIZARD LEADER OF THE 12 CLOAKED WIZARDS. LONG CLOAK

They are in middle of snow in the middle of nowwhere very rugged/area.wizard long CLOAK

SCROLL DOWN FOR COSTUMES FOR MALE/GIRL ACTION POSE FINGERS girl in white :)
cat LUTEMIS PREXIMUS AKA CAT MISCHIEF FLUFFY charcoal black with blue eyes

CLOAKED WIZARD HAS MAGIC WAND OF LIGHT not fire ball ;) girl breaks his wand with her chi energy light she learned from grand master Fox is now a unicorn/lion dragon ;)

Chinese Xiezhi unicorn horn/lion dragon, fur on head, claws okay, big tail. blue and gold colors

*****************************Fingers & position of arms for girl *********************

Girl pose in a very cool outfit. Color see red or purple or white purle below scroll down

Hot new modern classic & new hip Kung Fu/Magic Wizard out fit for girl Leather accent

Fur blue & white outfit No black color for girl ideas for her Hunger games/Kung Fu wizard

Fur trim? or leather trim...as they are in snow/mountains on their dangerous quest

Teen hot wizard fur color on outfit

no Egyptian eye on belt make cuffs more soldier looking & not spacey :)

Wizard Teen make long bangs dark brown hair /dark brown eyes handsome/cool /coat

********Teen wizard dark long bangs inbetween these up & down here the face************

Soldier classic buttons out fit on handsome/hot/teen wizard lead

Teen boy action pose male next to girl wearing soldier fur hot out fit ********************

Teen girl and her pose :) Cool hair cool braid in hair long flying hair as battle bad guy

Girl action pose hand position placement-- her magic breaks symbol sword of bad guy

Traditional dress with modern mix idea. Always have magic power to break the sword of dark wizard

GIRL POSE EYES FACING HER ENEMY THIS IS GOOD POSE

Girl & Guy standing action pose flying fighting together to get the key first from cloaked bad wizard man

fighting together againt
evil cloaked wizard men 12 of them but can use 1????

OLD WIZARD POSE FIGHTING THE TEEN WIZARDS POSE LEFT SIDE OF PAGE

***Girl will break the symbol sword shield of the bad cloaked wizard guy*******
CLOAKED WIZARD WITH SYMBOL SHIELD FLIES?

COOL EFFECT HER JOURNAL PAPERS HAVE THE KEY LOCATION CLUES

COOL IDEA BUT PUT SYMBOLS CAT ON IT WITH KEY????

Beautiful color. Girl needs a stunning Kung Fu outfit strong & feminine

Cool outfits Red white or blue white and gold

Use this as book cover to create on Chinese temple in snow/moutain

They go to cold mountains of China to train & find the key of light or loose magic power & be destroyed. SNOW faded CHINESE CASTLE with Fox and Key a symbol and the bad guy there.